Question
please tell me what u think?
This is a poem i wrote think it sucks but tell me.
Answer
A few suggestions. Try them on.brbrbrSweat on my back....line needs changing. it broke the momentumbrHe asked, quotAnother?brAnswer, unknownbrA struggle tug of war between yes and nobrSuch confusion sealing my mouth closedbrcriticsbrImbrstillbrwaitingbrbrTry thisthese. This is a good piece but it needs strngthening
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