Friday, October 5, 2012

Please POSITIVELY critique my poem?


Question


Please POSITIVELY critique my poem?
TitleHypocrites


Answer


Hello! You are definitely a better poet than some, but you have to work on the overall passion of the poem. With practice, youll definitely improve. brbrTipsbr Dont worry about rhyming.br Add more passion!br Dont be blunt.br Use literary devices metaphors, similies, alliteration, etc.br Every word counts. Dont be too wordy.br Work on your grammar.brbrGood luck!



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