Question
Please rate my poem?
I like you so much
Answer
The only way I could rate this would be to compare it against others I have read from you. This does not compare to what I have seen come from your mind. I see the thought, but the idea being conveyed by the message is lost through the approach. To me, this looks like you jotted down some ideas so that you could write a poem. This is not the finished product. I know that you can be deep and that you can have some very serious emotions. Oh yes, I do remember a few early Sunday mornings where I sat and blinked at the monitor as my expectations had been turned upside down due to some very heavy thinking.brSo I rate this as the beginnings to a poem about love. Question is, will you finish it, or is it just an exercise for you? Either way, no matter what it servesserved your purpose I believe.
