Would you follow . . your loved one . . to the end of the World?

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Would you follow . . your loved one . . to the end of the World?
Do you trust your loved one ... unconditionally?

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If only my ego . need for self sufficiency . and insecurity would allow.

Please rate my poem ?

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Please rate my poem ?
Please be honest

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Loved it, loved it!! Except I think I would change the last sentence. Im not sure to what, but when youre reading the poem, and the walls slowly fall, you wouldnt expect the next line to be the sun embraces. I dont know, it just didnt seem to fit right. Otherwise, excellent!!